Wednesday, April 21, 2010

Journal # 15: Analyzing an agrument

Eldred, G (Apr 14, 2010). Letter to the editor: Daily Titan ASI Election Coverage. Daily Titan. Retrieve April 22, 2010 from http://www.dailytitan.com/2010/04/14/letter-to-the-editor-daily-titan-asi-election-coverage/

The author 's thesis: He's completely fed up with Daily Titan, and its coverage of the Voting booths.
He claimed that The Daily Titan has covered the election, quite biasedly. He thinks if the coverage of the election started sooner with objective articles giving all students the enough information, there would not have blind voters. The Daily Titan have to be straight and honest because it can not please everyone. The author also believe the Daily Titan and its continuous negative coverage of the elections is a contributing factor for the reason why there 's small percentage of people voting.
For finding solution, he has worked with a few students on the ASI University Affairs committee to change the bylaws so the Daily Titan can fix this issue, not disappointing students again.

In my opinion, his argument has not been persuasive enough. He needs to add more evidence, more facts and information from the students he 's been working with.

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